1. There are numerous difficulties to overcome while growing into adulthood just growing up to adulthood. 단지 어른이 되는 과정에도
2. We do not underestimate a pushing power to the peers affected one person's behavior.
-> One should not underestimate the power of peer pressure to influence a person's behavior. 한 사람의 행동에 영향을 주는 동료 압박의 힘을 과소평가해서는 안된다.
3. I will build a community center for teenagers who socialize at after-school.
-> I would build a youth-oriented community center for teens to socialize at after-school. 젊은이들을 위해 만들어진
4. It is common for a schools to identify prospective promising youths and to accelerate their learning curve. 장래성 있는 젊은이
~하는 것은 일반적이다 it is common for 명사 to 부정사
가려내다 identify 박차를 가하다 accelerate
5. Another negative effect of advertising is observed from influences to youth cultures which impact on.
-> Another negative effect of advertising can be observed from its impact on youth culture. 광고의 또 다른 부정적 효과는 청소년 문화에 미치는 그것의 영향에서 찾아 볼 수 있다.
~에서 관찰되다, 발견되다 : be observed from ~ / ~에 끼치는 영향 impact on ~
6. According to studies, organized after-school sports activities (방과후 스포츠 활동)demonstrate to reduce juvenile delinquency rate.
-> Studies have also demonstrated that organized after-school sports activities reduce rates of juvenile delinquency. 연구들에 의하면 ~~~ 청소년 범죄의 비율을 낮추고 있음이 입증되고 있다. demonstrate = 입증하다.
7. Even club meetings, it makes sure that a lead facilitator (지도 후원자) is needed for the meeting going smoothly.
-> Even club meetings need a lead facilitator to make sure that the meeting goes smoothly. 확실히 ~ 하다 make sure that S+V / 원활하게 진행되다 go smoothly
8. I feel that students receive the high-school education to be knowledgeable (지식을 갖춘) and well-rounded (다재다능한) people.
-> I feel students should pursue a higher education to become knowledgeable and well-rounded people. 고등교육을 받다
9. When preparing university admission test, I've found that studying with a teacher pushing me is much easier.
-> When studying for my college entrance exams, I found it much easier to learn with a teacher pushing me. 대입준비시험
10. Many students prefer a dormitory over an off-the campus life due to its convenience and location.
-> Many students prefer dormitories over off-campus life because of convenience and location. 캠퍼스를 벗어난 생활 / B보다 A를 선호하다 : prefer A over B
11. It should be top priority for every students to strive being a well educated person.
-> Striving to be a well-educated person should be the top priority of all students.
~를 위해 노력하다 strive to / 잘 교육 받은 사람이 되기 위해 노력하는 것은 모든 학생들에게 최우선순위가 되어야 한다.
12. Studying in a group teaches students to work in team.
-> Studying in a group (그룹 스터디를 하는 것은) teaches students how to work in teams.
13. Teacher who is patient and is able to explain new information precisely facilitate learning process.
-> A teacher who is patient and can clearly explain new information helps to facilitate the learning process. 학습과정
14. These courses are important and are not relegated to optional extracurricular activities.
-> These courses are important and shouldn't be relegated to optional extracurricular activities. 과외 활동. ~로 격하되다 : be relegated to ~
15. After getting college admission, many students skip most part of classes during freshman year.
-> After gaining university admission, many students skip most of their classes during freshman year.