1. For instance, my most treasured possession is the necklace which my parents gave me at 16th birthday. (my most treasured possession is a necklace that my parents bought for me on my 16th birthday.)
2. In another case, a study shows that almost 100% literacy rate is for all developed countries. (a study showed that the literacy rate was nearly 100% in all developed countries.)
3. To be specific, I go to gym and play tennis.
4. Now, let's explain why that some people are attracted to such a extreme sports.
5. From my experiences, the appearance can be often deceiving. (appearances can often be deceiving.)
6. On top of that, students are completely totally free to make a decision when they study in foreign country by themselves.
(students are completely free to make their own decisions when studying in a foreign country.)
7. In particular, people often go to museums in visiting area for learning local history and cultures. (people often visit museums to learn about the history and culture of the area they are visiting.)
8. As the old saying goes, the gesture actions speak louder than words the language.
9. Aside from(~이외에) Not only that, but medicinal uses, aloe vera is also used in to cosmetics and lotions.
10. The game is educational not to mention entertaining.
Games can be educational, not to mention entertaining.
11. Experts would verify that people activities deplete the Earth of much of its natural resources.
12. Some people presume that 몇몇사람들은 ~여긴다. the money is the only motivation for working to do a work.
13. The majority of people the public seems to agree that TV and movies can influence behavior.
14. As one might expect,(누구나 예상했듯이) computers totally change how students access the information and ways of research. (computers have completely changed the way students access and research information.)
15. Studies have indicated that people being exposed to secondhand smoke are at a risk of having a cancer. (people who are exposed to secondhand smoke are at a greater risk of cancer than smokers themselves.)
연구결과에 따르면 간접흡연에 노출된 사람들은 흡연자 본인들보다도 암에 걸릴 더 큰 위험에 놓여있는 것으로 지적되었다.