1. People have to learn what they try new.
-> People should learn to try new things.
2. To work Working for someone else doesn't appeal to me.
3. It is important for me to have good conversation with a friend.
-> A friend who I can have good conversations with is important to me.
4. Students can learn more when they are interested in the subjects which they study.
5. When you win the game it is more enjoyable.
-> Games are more enjoyable when you win.
6. I would like to live in an area where there is little crime or pollution.
7. There are better ways to spend use taxpayer's money.
8. An apartment is not as spacious as a house.
9. It shouldn't be forced the students to wear uniforms.
-> Students should not be forced to wear uniforms.
10. It takes time to become comfortable with others.
11. Movies are the most popular type form of entertainment.
12. As When I was growing grown up, my father was my role model.
13. Eating out is not only cheap but also very convenient.
14. It seems to be foolish to that you spend all your money.
15. Reading and writing are the fundamental skills that every people has to learn.
Riding the bus is a pain in the neck, especially during rush hour.
-> bus는 분명히 셀 수 있는 명사이므로 관사를 써주든지, 복수형으로 바꿔줍니다. the + 교통수단이므로 the bus로 고칩니다.
What do you think is the most important animal to the Korean people?
-> 집단을 나타내는 복수명사는 정관사 없이 복수형만 쓰면 틀립니다. 한국에서 사람들이 가장 좋아하는 동물을 이야기하고 있으니, 여기서는 한국사람, 즉 모든 한국인들을 의미하므로 the Korean people로 고쳐야 합니다.
the : 문맥상 한정되는 명사, 즉 이미 언급되었거나 특정한 것을 가리키는 명사 앞
a/an : 문맥상으로도 한정되지 않는 불특정한 보통명사("어떤")
He doesn't know how to treat the people who work for him.
-> people은 문장에서 who work for him이라는 관계절로 한정을 받기 때문에 the를 써주어야 합니다.